Marked

I dont't really know where I left off in my last post buuut I know that she was trying not to like blood and stay away from erick. She Msut embrace that blood is what shew ants and she can't thinks he is a freak because of that everyone there drinks it. Erick said that when he first caught sight of it he puked his guts out and when she catches first sight of it she wants to chug it down. So different but when he walked her to her room he stopped bit her wrist kissed it and licked it he said she could always go back to him for a little taste * of blood * and she was obviously shocked. Aphroditie is the one who LOVES erick and will stop at nothing to win him back. She tries to show off and show off her body and he said him self the only pleasure she gives him is physical nothing more. And this girl her name is Zoey i think and he said she gives him more than just that she does somethign emotionally to him and it was so sweet and a little weird..... but there is more and  reading it hope to read the rest soon.

Marked

I read this book marked. It was really interesting actually I hope Ms.galang has the other books so I can continue to read the rest of the series. Its about this girl who gets a cresent moon mark on her fore head and is becoming a vampire and her mom and step father think she is the devil and is like posessed so she runs away to the house of darkness I think it was called and has to go thru the transformation of becoming a vampire. She tries to prevent from liking blood and this boy who she saw getting a BJ ..... O.o......... anyways he follows her sometimes to find out where she is going and to see if she is ever in any kind of trouble and he tried to help her out but the girl that gave him a BJ is jealous and hates the fact that its happening because that is her ex. And the main characters ex it trying to get back with her as well. I wonder whats gonna happen.

reading responce

I read the book evermore by Alyson noel and it was a very good book, it showed emotion. It showed how to deal with romance and drama and other people. How she has these powers to let her read other peoples minds and to see how they feel. She absolutley hates it and she has to live with her aunt because her family died in a car crash and she was saved by someone whom she doesn't know. But soon enough she bumps into Damen the person she finds out is immortal and saved her. The one who loves and wants to protect her. She finds out that he isnt human and has had many incarinations before and and all Damen wants is to get her back and not be with Drina. The beautiful one who loves Damen who once had him but lost him to ever. The one who always kills ever and ends up with Damen again. But that won't happen this time. Damen just can't bear to lost her again and again and again. But even though thru thick and thin Ever and Damen's relationship worked out even thought they had 2 breakups and they were immortal together and Drina was killed. But not i have to get the second book to find out what happens next. :p

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She was sitting in the bathroom on the floor in the corner or an open stall. The teacher slowly walked around the bathroom Heather hearing her foot steps coming closer and closer. The teacher got closer and looked into one stall and jumped and screamed when she saw Heather there, Heather had the same reaction. The teacher bent down to heathers level and asked,
" What's the matter heather why you crying ? "
" They making fun of me and laughing at me there not talking to me either. "
" Who ? " The teacher asked
" The kids in class they are being very mean I tryed to be nice, I talked to one of the girls and she looked at me glared looked back her friends and started laughing ".
The teacher stood back up and took Heather's hand. The marched out of the bathroom and into the classroom. The girls who stared at her before are looking at her again. The teacher polietley asked
" Who were the girls who stared at you and started laughing ?"
Heather looked up at the girl shed a tear and pointed to her. The other girl gave her a cold glare. The teacher looked up to her and said
" Brianna in the time out chair NOW !! " Brianna slowly walked to the other side of the room towards the chair staring at heather the whole time. She got to the chair she took one last look at everybody who was now staring at her she look at heather once more and started to quietley chuckle then turned around and sat in the chair.

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She was hurt. Woundering why the kids moved away from her, wouldn't talk to her, would even look at her and if they did it was a nasty glare. She couldn't bare it anymore and she started crying. The kids looked at her and started laughing. The teacher noticed and pulled her outside to talk to her.
" Heather what's wrong ? " the teacher asked.
" The kids they aren't talking to me or playing with me :( " Heather squealed. The teacher said it would be fine just be nice and talk to them nicey and try to befriend them. She did as she was told and no one talked to her.
" Hey " heather said to a group or girls " I'm Heather "
The girls just looked at her and they gave her a dirty glare and then turned to each other and smirked. Heather got scared and ran away, everyone started laughing. Heather ran into the girls bathroom into one of the stalls. The teacher shortly noticed heather had ran out of the room and when to go look for her. She searched every where then she looked in the bathroom only to find, Heather curled up into a ball in a open stall on the floor.

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"Mom i don't want to go to school ! " , heather is nervous about her first day at school.
" No you have to go end of story " her mother said . Heather and her mother walked to the school it was only 5 blocks away. When they get to the school heather looks around and then looks at her self she is confused she asked her mother .
"mom why am i the only one with purple fur and everyone else has pink or blue ? " Her mother looked a little frightened replying ,
"Oh sweetie your just very unique and special don't worry everyone will love you ." she had tried to crack a smile but failed . Heather nodded and walked into class. she saw everyone running around playing with each other. She took another step into the class and everyone stopped, they stared at her as she entered the classroom and up to the teacher .
" Hi I'm Ms.Caro " said the teacher.
" Hi I'm Heather :) . Heather took a seat in the back with a group of kids they all stared at her and then moved their seats as far away from her as possible .

my inpiration (Kevin Henkes' Chrysanthemum)

Chrysanthemum by Kevin Henkes. It inspired me to write a book about the purple baby and how she got made fun of. Because Chrysanthemum was a long name and got made fun of for it. no one cares about what she was like as a person or why she was so special in her own way, just because of a name -.- ......... Anyways my story relates to it because no one cares for the purple baby. except her parents, they don't see that even thought she is purple she is still special and no one is able to see how sweet and nice she really is until she dies her fur and pretends to be like everyone else